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The Loveless Stranger by ~likeabadstar:iconlikeabadstar:



you're walking home alone tonight,
with yourself, the loveless stranger.

bare tree branches sway in the fog,
while you're running from everything,
through fields of hopelessness,
despair and surrender.
you'll never make it out alive.
but i can't complain.

do you really want to feel the way you do?
this disease will wear off,
but your scars enjoy their residence.

don't say i didn't warn you.
©2005-2009 ~likeabadstar
:iconlikeabadstar:

Author's Comments

some doo-dad i made up.

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:icondingusmcgee:
paints a picture
with trees in it

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[link] THE BACON. Go there. Use our forum. I know you wanna.

98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, you're probably one of those pussies who believes everything they're told.
:icondingusmcgee:
in all seriousness, though
while it's not one of your stronger pieces by any means,
i do like the "running through fields of

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[link] THE BACON. Go there. Use our forum. I know you wanna.

98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, you're probably one of those pussies who believes everything they're told.
:icondingusmcgee:
in all seriousness, though
while it's not one of your stronger pieces by any means,
i do like the "running through fields of hopelessness despair and surrender" analogy
its as if to say, by simply trying to escape whatever it is that's bringin you down, you're only subjecting yourself to more hurt.
i don't know if that's what you were going for
maybe i'm reading too deeply into this

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[link] THE BACON. Go there. Use our forum. I know you wanna.

98% of teenagers do or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, you're probably one of those pussies who believes everything they're told.
:iconlikeabadstar:
no you are not.

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...i don't blame you for walking away, i'd do the same if i saw me...
:iconlockedinside:
for some reason i really like this...i'm not sure what it is but hey its a fav cause it hits a cord with me...

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:tears:†Kyle Franklin†:tears:
:tears:†Grandpa Bob†:tears:
:tears:†Baby Jake Preston†:tears:
:tears:†Sierra Renee Follette†:tears:
:sadangel:R-I-P I miss you All:sadangel:

...+I can't cry all the time...cus it shouldn't hurt
:iconlikeabadstar:
YAY!!!!

Thank you very much.

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...i don't blame you for walking away, i'd do the same if i saw me...

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